Monday, July 27, 2009

Storyboard Saga - Part 5 - Plus more news

What I'm reading: New Blood, by Gail Dayton; The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo, by Stieg Larsson

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I was asked by my RWA chapter to present some of my 'plotting for non-plotters' techniques at their next meeting—which is this Saturday.

I'll bring my story board, of course. I'll be presenting with another member of the chapter, erotic romance author Lara Dien, and we're going to get together Wednesday evening to figure out what we're going to say.

And, the members usually want handouts. I like getting handouts. But now I have to create one – before I give the talk. To me, that sounds suspiciously like plotting in advance!

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I'll be working on that this week. And yes, once I have it done, I'll share. And if Lara has a handout, I'll share hers too.

As for the storyboard tracking. I'm moving forward, as you might be able to tell if you compare this picture with the one I posted the last time I discussed my discovery of this technique.

And here's my idea board.

My only new addition to the storyboard: time. I normally do this on the computer, in the master file, but I've really been enjoying being able to look at the whole book without having to search the manuscript, so I've added neon green stickies reminding me which day it is (and I'm in chapter 20, and day 3 has just dawned.

Time is always a challenge when I'm writing more than one POV character when they're not on the same page. Character 1 might be off investigating the crime, while character 2 is telling her friend about getting mugged. Character 3 might be off jogging. I'd settled into a 'routine' – each chapter began with a scene in Gordon, my cop's POV, and the second scene was from either Megan's or Justin's, and they'd alternate. You can kind of see this on the storyboard: Gordon's green, Megan is pink, and Justin is blue.

Then I hit chapter 19. I knew at some point, I'd have to deal with his attraction to the waitress, and this seemed to be when he demanded it happen. The scene carried over into the "morning after." (It was also a bit strange to have an abbreviated, mostly off-the-page sex scene after writing 6 romances). So, I was now in the morning of day 3.

Only trouble was, Megan and Justin were having dinner on day 2 in the previous scene. To keep the time continuity clear, I'd have to jump ahead to the next day. But there were critical plot points that had to be covered.

At least Megan and Justin were together, so when I popped back into their POV scene, it would be when we left off.

When I read the chapter, I realized I was asking the reader to figure out that they'd just jumped back in time to the previous night. It made more sense to flip the scenes in that chapter. The other alternative, which didn't feel right, would have been to have a really long chapter to bring Justin and Megan into the morning of Day 3. While I don't have any rules as to how long a chapter or scene should be, each scene seems to feel complete at about the 4-6 page mark.

Another possibility would have been to have added Justin's scene to chapter 19, making it a three-scene chapter.

Is any of it 'right' or 'wrong'? I don't think so. Some authors will put date, time, and place headers in each chapter or scene of their books. I find that I gloss over or ignore them, wanting to know what's happening more than where or when, so I don't choose to add them to my books. I suppose if I had a lot of threads where characters were all over, I might consider it.

Scenes and chapters don't have to conform to any given length. So, adding a third scene wouldn't be 'wrong' either. It just didn't feel right.

And that seems to be how I write. It has to flow in such a way that it makes sense to me first.

What's your preference on following time when dealing with stories where the POV characters aren't together?

Tomorrow, my guest is author Blair Bancroft, who's going to recap her special tour of the FBI from the Romance Writer's of America conference. I'm regretting not being able to go even more. You won't want to miss it.


Teresa Reasor said...

Good idea about the time factor. I haven't ever added time to my board. Though it is in my story. Hmm. I'll have to figure out if I need to for the type of story I'm writing. My character is a Saturation diver and has to spend several days in a Saturation system they call it the pot. So I think what I've done is have them count down the time in dialogue and internal dialogue. But in my murder mystery, I may need to do this so I'll keep it in mind.

By the way I really enjoy reading your blogs about the detective.
Write on,
Teresa r.

Elena said...

It occured to me that for a "handout", give everyone their own pad of sticky notes to try out. I know that's a handout that wouldn't land in one of my file folders.

Terry Odell said...

Thanks, Teresa - there's so much to keep track of, isn't there?

Elena -- great idea. Maybe I'll do that. I certainly have lots of sticky notes.

Sarah McD. said...

Enjoyed your post. I love using a storyboard! I'll be reading over your other posts to get new ideas. I like to view the whole book at once, and there's something about the tactile input that 'works' for me.

BTW, We met last year in SF at Nationals-I feel your pain about not being able to go this year. *SIGH*

Terry Odell said...

Hi, Sarah! Good to 'see' you again. I did get to RT and SleuthFest, so I've had a couple of conference 'fixes' this year.

Shelley Munro said...

I've just started to dabble with storyboarding. I'm about to start work on a single title where doing a little preplotting is necessary. I'm normally a determined pansters, but I'm gradually doing more plotting. I like the look of your idea board.

Terry Odell said...

Shelly - the idea stickies are great. And when you get one of those, "OH, I should have said something about XXX" you can just slap a sticky on the board and not disrupt your thought process if you're on a roll somewhere else in the book. (Like I did today!)

Sheila Deeth said...

Thanks Terry, and congratulations. It really is a fun read!

Terry Odell said...

Sheila, thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it. I have interviews with my characters from When Danger Calls in the Free Reads portion of my website, if you'd like to meet Frankie & Ryan.