tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30931389.post8355836228179642389..comments2008-08-19T10:40:41.868-04:00Comments on Terry's Place: FeedbackTerry Odellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11610682530545306687terry@terryodell.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30931389.post-56774886189331028222008-08-19T10:40:00.000-04:002008-08-19T10:40:00.000-04:00Joan,true, but he doesn't really expect me to make...Joan,true, but he doesn't really expect me to make changes based on those kinds of comments. He just loves being 'accurate'. He writes science fiction, and his current WIP uses a lot of physics. I give him "heck" for his attempts at emotional scenes. We did have some great fun discussing sex at zero-GTerry Odellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11610682530545306687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30931389.post-45773525221204095962008-08-18T12:12:00.000-04:002008-08-18T12:12:00.000-04:00The "picky" comment isn't just picky; it's of litt...The "picky" comment isn't just picky; it's of little value. You were relating how a character feels and thinks about something so it wouldn't have mattered, except from the standpoint of the character's intelligence, if she had thought: She held her breath and it made her feel like an elephant. *g*Sling Words aka Joan Reeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17622809465767116747noreply@blogger.com